The best.
Instead of commenting on each chapter of this story, I decided to watch them all and my god, it's been fun.
There are some seriously laugh out loud moments in this movie and regardless of whether it truly belongs on Newgrounds or not, I am glad that you've posted it here because I feel as if I've just watched something very worthy of my attention. The actors involved in this are very talented and they pull off their roles with ease. I'm amazed that you've managed to get so many people together to film this.
The camerawork was great and it showed originality. The choice of soundtrack was also appreciated and you could tell that each song had been picked for a reason.
You must of worked pretty damn hard on the storyboarding for this, as I'm sure this wasn't just a case of improv on the day. You've written some seriously funny scenes and fused them together with drama. It works well.
While nothing is ever perfect and I'm sure there are improvements that could be made to this movie, I for one would not think twice about watching something of this calibre on the big screen, as it has all of the right qualities.
Well done for making some quality entertainment and I hope you plan on furthering your careers in moviemaking.